On top of what TheReviewTricker said in his comment I'd say that although it feels like you've at least put some effort into the submition, I'd suggest putting some more time into considering things like what you want to happen and what you want it to be about etc.

Huh

I actually see potential in this series. Keep it up :)

Needs more olskoo

One of the worst games I've seen ever

Good job. I like this game

Quack

Wew lad

Bleh

Pint

Iiiiiiiis Boooooris!

Bruh